Final Version of my Magazine
- After receiving feedback from my teacher and piers I have decided to change my magazine in an attempt to make it better
My frist magazine didd'nt do so well according to the feedback and I was getting comments that the colours I had chosen made it look more like a horror magazine which is not what I had intended. So according to feedback I have decided to change my magazine to make it look less like a horror magazine and more like a Pop Music Magazine. Below is the Front Cover to my magazine which I am hoping it is going to be a lot more effective at being a pop music magazine then the other versions of my magazine that didn't do so well.
Front Cover/Contents Page/Double Page Spread
I have changed my colour scheme from dark and dreary colours to more bright and cheerful colours. I have now chosen Blue, red and other shades of blue top be my colour scheme with a few other colours in their as well. These colours are a lot better then the ones I had before as my fellow piers have told me. My classmates have told me that they would see this magazine from a distance and would be a lot more interested to read it compared to my other magazine. As for the general style, well, that has not really changed much as I have changed the colours mostly.
I have changed some other aspects to the magazine such as fonts for the headings and the colours for the headings as well. I have changed the main heading dramatically from it being black and dreary to bright and attractive which is exactly what I was aiming at. I have created a spotted border to the main heading to try and make it look more exciting, I have also made the "The Mother of all Music" be more bold and stand out a lot better over the blue background because it is in white writing after all which stands out on most backgrounds. As for the sub-headings I have changed them to be more attractive as well by putting a blue and black background around the white text which makes it stand out a lot more and makes it look better at the sane time. I have kept the main title in red because I believe this is the best colour to have it in, it makes the whole magazine look a lot better.
The overall background has changed as well and looks a lot better. instead of having a dark black background which is what it used to be, I have decided to change it to the blue background. The background starts of as dark blue at the bottom but then as you up the page near the title it begins to get to a lighter blue which adds a good effect to the page. with all these changes that I have made to the front page I should be able to get better marks and improve my grade.
Contents Page
The contents page has also got a good remodel as well as the front cover and the double page spread. I need to in order to improve my magazine because I was not pleased with the feedback I was given by my fellow piers, so I needed to take action and something needed to be change for the better.
